Cool song lol
I really liked the beginning lead. Can you ask him what lead he used?? I really liked how this song started, with that good peaceful little lead, and it was a great start for this song. There were mistakes and stuff that could be fixed and changed.
The short pause at 2:18 - 2:19 was kind of...weird. And when the lead got louder at 2:34, it was too loud, and it would sound better if it got a bit lowered.
At 3:14 when he put that new little melody in there, it was really good and i wanted it to go maybe a little longer, it ended too short for me :[
I felt there were some transitions that he could have worked on cause some things changed too drastically so...yeah...i loved the idea for the song and the melodies but he just needs to work a little more on the song.
Well i liked and enjoyed this song though, so i give it a 9/10. 5/5. ^.^
I think the intro was the best part tho.
2.37(+0.45) --> 2.82